Wednesday, 2 November 2011

Rough cut analysis

within our rough cut we have some elements which we have decided didn't work as well as we first thought but also we have elements that worked in the way we expected. 
 First of all we have decided that we definitely need a bigger costume difference between the characters; over exaggerating on the characters persona and style of the character so it becomes more interesting to watch and then the swap is seen as more dramatic. Another thing we have decided that needs to be changed is the angle at which the two characters jump and bump into one another in order to keep good continuity and to keep the jump flowing and not jumping. 
 The things we would keep the same are things such as the story line itself and have more footage  to choose from and be able to have a longer running film - leading to a more complete story line which is continuous and is more in depth. We would also keep the two characters the same as if we changed them now the entire story in essence would change; being something we don't want to do. The characters would still be a very wealthy guy who has a very good high standard of living;  and then the opposite character being a much more underdressed guy in a tracksuit who seems to be stereotypically seen to have  much lower standard of living. 

Overall we believe that our rough cut was a good outline of what we would like to have as a final - however we would like it to be a more in depth view of the characters and also have the story line be clear. Costumes must be incorporated to a larger extent but our rough cut is still a good example for us to follow in our final video. 

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