- Can be improved by better continuity through the shot changes
- There is jumps from each shot to the next
- You could shorten the shots and then incorporate them in a different order as there is only 3 shot types present at the
2. Mise-en-Scene
- Casual costumes fit well with the genre
- More variety of locations would be better
3. Camerawork
- The first tracking shot fits well with the fast beat of the song
- Lack of different shot types, needs some close ups of the artist/s
4. Genre Elements
- Needs to be quicker paced
5. Performance
- There is no performance present so this needs to be added in
- Lip syncing?
- There is a good sense of humour from some shots
6. What and how to improve
- Faster pace cuts to fit the beats of the song
- More variety of shot types
- Needs lip syncing
- More engagement with camera and audience
- Vary locations
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